Hi Adi, I recently saw your blog and just wanted to give a little feedback asking if you could put more in your work for others to see like explaining the person and using more details.
Hi Adi, I agree with Madina's comment above. When doing a profile about someone you need to include detail. For example you could have told us what books he has written and what age they are appropriate for. You could have also told us where he gets his inspirations for his novels. I would like to see you put more effort into the quality of the work content rather than just the presentation please.
Hi Adi, I recently saw your blog and just wanted to give a little feedback asking if you could put more in your work for others to see like explaining the person and using more details.
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Hi Adi, I agree with Madina's comment above. When doing a profile about someone you need to include detail. For example you could have told us what books he has written and what age they are appropriate for. You could have also told us where he gets his inspirations for his novels. I would like to see you put more effort into the quality of the work content rather than just the presentation please.
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