Friday 4 September 2015

Dog on a beach Adi

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3 comments:

  1. Unknown5 September 2015 at 18:28

    This is a good dog on the beach story Adi next time maybe you could add more detail and try and go in a more quiet spot so we can hear you more clearley
    ELZ

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  2. Unknown5 September 2015 at 18:28

    This is a good dog on the beach story Adi next time maybe you could add more detail and try and go in a more quiet spot so we can hear you more clearley
    ELZ

    ReplyDelete

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