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Hi Adi ,I really enjoyed reading your limerick ,Maybe next time you could explain what limerick is for other people who don't understand what that is , also I think you should re-read your writing to make sure that it makes sense ,Other than that keep up the good work !Lini
Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Hi Adi ,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your limerick ,
Maybe next time you could explain what limerick is for other people who don't understand what that is , also I think you should re-read your writing to make sure that it makes sense ,
Other than that keep up the good work !
Lini