Friday 25 November 2016

Literacy Reflection T4 W7

Here is My Literacy Reflection so what we have been doing was making a lyric to 12 days of Christmas but in a kiwi version here is my work.
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  1. Unknown30 November 2016 at 09:09

    Kia Ora Adi. It's Reagan. Those lyrics are really cool. I really like the fish n chips one. Next time you could say a bit more like it was hard or easy. Did you like doing this? From Reagan

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  2. Unknown30 November 2016 at 09:12

    Kia Oar Adi. That was a good song I like the words that you chose but I think that you could try to make it more tune full. My favorite line is 3 bags of lollies. Tino Pai tau mahi (good work).

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